goldstar ([identity profile] insight2.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] charlieblue 2008-06-27 03:21 am (UTC)

i liked the insanity that came across with the language you used, the sensuality of it fit the primitive events in the first part. and i also liked how they're both damaged at the end there. i wonder who the sleeper is though?
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